Bob, did you put a name on your version?
Ric, I admit to being confused by your dance. Are you putting an allemande
once and a half AND two full petronella in the B2? Normally I'd give 8
counts to each petronella balance and move; so two fill out one B. Does
your dance Fried Rice perhaps not have the long lines?
(yes, I know this was a while ago; digging through a back-log)
On Thu, Jun 1, 2017 at 2:11 AM, Ric Goldman - Letsdance via Callers <
callers(a)lists.sharedweight.net> wrote:
  Hi Bob,
 It’s almost the same as my dance Fried Rice, written in 2012 in a Chinese
 restaurant while waiting for dinner.  The only difference is the B2 5-8:
 Fried Rice, duple improper
 A1           1-8          Neighbors balance + swing
 A2           1-4          Gents allemande L 1-1/2
                 5-8          Partners swing
 B1           1-4          Long lines fwd & back
                 5-8          Circle L 3/4
 B2           1-4          Neighbors allemande R 1-1/2
                 5-6          Balance the ring, petronella
 7-8          Balance the ring, petronella with an extra half-turn to face
 new neighbors
 Hope this helps.
 Thanx, Ric Goldman
 *From:* Callers [mailto:callers-bounces@lists.sharedweight.net] *On
 Behalf Of *Bob Isaacs via Callers
 *Sent:* Wednesday, May 31, 2017 7:12 PM
 *To:* Shared Weight <callers(a)sharedweight.net>
 *Subject:* [Callers] New Dance?
 Hive Mind:
 I wrote the following solid little contra on a recent flight when I had
 too much time on my hands, and it went well on its initial test.   It
 didn't show up in my database, but do you know if it has been written
 previously?
 Improper
 A1.  Neighbor balance, swing
 A2.  Gents allemande L 1 1/2, partner swing
 B1.  Long lines, circle L 3/4
 B2.  Neighbor allemande R 1 1/2, 1/2 hey (GL, PR, LL, -)
 Bob
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