[Callers] Flow

Aahz, Nice dance. There are some great transitions and ideas in this dance and I look forward to calling it soon. With that said, I don't put your dance in the 'flowing' category. The two right and left thrus aren't flowing for the men in particular and especially if they are danced with a tradition courtesy (men move forward and then back for the courtesy turns). Right and left through for me, have sort of a stop and start feel when compared with a hey. I think the moves in the B1 are not flowing but are not bad flow either. If flow is your bag, maybe substitute two half heys for the 2 right and left thrus in the A1 although the flow into the circle left 3/4 may be interesting...... and consider this for the B1: B1 Half hey (men left), men allemande left once and a half. Tom