Thanks for all the great suggestions.   I think I’ve fixed the dance.  Attached.
Hopefully, some new dances will emerge from the thought processes put into this.  What a
great community of callers!
Summer of '24 – Rich Goss (11/13/24)                                              
Improper
 
A1:   LLFB,
         Larks pull by left across, Partner alle Right 1x
         (wave of 4 across, Larks left in center)
 
A2:   Bal Wave, walk fwd to new wave
         (Larks left in center) 
            Bal Wave, 1/2 hey (start pass rt on side)
         (to partner coming from another hey)
 
B1:   Partner Balance and Swing
 
B2:   Circle Left 3/4, Neighbor Swing