I don't have a name for this dance but I think these changes will get it to
work. (Not guaranteed, though.) You probably just made some transcription
errors.
Unknown Dance
Becket
A1 (8) Pass through to an ocean wave, balance
(8) Walk to shadow and DSD (or gypsy)
A2 (8) Return to original Neighbor (?!) taking LH in a wave, balance
that neighbor would be your Partner
(8) Women allemande Left 1/2, balance the wave
women allemande Right 1/2
B1 (4) Walk forward to new Neighbor
(12) Neighbor swing
B2 (8) Long lines, forward and back
remove the long lines altogether
(16) Give & Take with partner, swing on Women¹s side
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Gary