Gale, you notated the dance correctly. A Google search for "Pining for you"
"David Smukler" took me to the dance on his website--
http://www.davidsmukler.syracusecountrydancers.org/DSS.html#pines
Would Cross Trails be better as Square Through 2
Square Through 2 would give the dancers a hand connection that's not there in
the cross trail, yes, but even that figure can cause difficulty with less
skilled dancers. After the first pull by, dancers need to know which direction
to turn for the second one.
I'm speculating that the problem is not with the dance itself but rather in
selecting that as a dance to try out with many newer dancers on the floor. The
sequence in B2 works just fine, but if you have many people who don't know what
they're doing, you'll need to spend more time than you want explaining how this
works. (It's sort of akin to teaching a hey for four on the left diagonal at a
one-night stand. Yes, it could be done, but by the time one had finished the
lengthy instruction, a demonstration, and countless walkthroughs, you've spent
far too much time talking and the dancers are convinced that they can't do this
and why would anyone in their right mind want to do this kind of complicated
dancing anyhow... I mean, what's the point?)
In David's dance, folks need to get into the correct position with the circle
left exactly 3/4, then execute a rollaway on the side of the set to change
places with the neighbor, and then dance the cross-trail with their neighbor to
end up crossing the set to end on the correct side, progressed. Lots of
opportunities there for folks to go wrong.
I always encourage less-experienced callers to select simpler material than
their first instinct. In this, I'm echoing Ted Sannella, who stressed the KISS
principle: Keep it simple, stupid! Most callers I know, and I certainly am
counting myself in this number, have the tendency to want to call a fascinating
sequence, something with a distinct difference that'll make the dance (and, by
extension, the person who called it) stand out in memory. All well and good, up
to a point. The key thing to keep in mind is that we're there at the mic to make
it possible for dancers to dance, and most of them want to spend as much time as
possible dancing, not learning something complicated. (A workshop setting has
somewhat different ground rules, but I'm speaking at an open-to-the-public
event.) We do better, I think, to present material that can be taught quickly
and then let the dancers enjoy themselves.
My suggestion would be to save trying out such a dance for an opportunity when
you can work with a small group of experienced dancers, perhaps a gathering of
callers where folks are there explicitly to explore dances that they've never
called.
David Millstone