7 Aug
2011
7 Aug
'11
5:57 p.m.
On Sun, Aug 7, 2011 at 8:52 AM, Mark Stowe <mkstowegnv(a)gmail.com> wrote:
Video at the burningmancontradance.com website -
missed the nights with
two
lines and this years should be more interesting. Better reason to go the
site - my own take on an intro to contra (comments appreciated).
The web site freezes my old computer. Please don't launch multiple videos
without asking.
The intro page is quite good. Thanks for not trying to explain what contra
dance *is*. It could be tightened even more by letting the video provide
context and focusing all text on what the reader actually needs in order to
participate. Assume that the reader wants to join you and just give the
information about what they need in order to do so. Make it a list.
- Greg McKenzie