Congratulations, Jack, on spending so much time thinking about your program.
Such reflection will let you learn a lot.
You wrote, " Usually I just mull over a dance afterwards, sometimes talking it
out with another dancer. "
If there's another caller in your area at about your same level of skill and
experience, I'd recommend forming a caller buddy system with that person. Attend
each othr's dances, get together at the break and afterwards to talk about what
went well, what was problematic, what wording was effective and what was
confusing... this can be a very helpful way to boost each of your skills.
Pig/Mud dance: You asked "Other ideas??"
The option that first occurs to me is "Choose another dance."
Here you have a dance that inherently presents a challenge-- dancers must leave
their partners to form stars. The only fixed points in the star are you and your
shadow, along with two ever-changing other people, and the shadow relationship
has not already been established at this point in the dance.
If dancers do go in the wrong direction, even that shadow relationship will be
made even more tenuous. You might end up with 5-person and 3 person stars, and
while you as caller know that things will work out okay-- "as long as you go
somewhere, turn a star and then swing your partner"-- dancers
will certainly be discombobulated if they keep finding themselves in strange
groupings.
So, a harder than usual dance.
Secondly, you mentioned that you had "a lower proportion of experienced dancers
to beginners than usual."
Third, you presented it as the last dance before the break. Many of us like to
use that slot to call a fail-safe dance, so that dancers go into the break
having had a confidence-building joyful experience.
If I'm calling a harder-than-usual dance, I'll usually slot it as the
next-to-last dance in the first set, or, depending on the crowd, as the first
dance after the break.
In my video "Sweet Talk," focusing on veteran caller Ralph Sweet, there's a
segment in which Ralph dispenses advice for callers. He talks a little about
programming choices, and in particular discuses a situation in which the caller
comes into an evening with a particular dance firmly in mind"
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"I really want to do this dance tonight" and that's not a good attitude.
"I've got to do this dance tonight", that's a baddy.
"Will the dancers enjoy doing this dance tonight?" Then I'll do it.
That's what
you've got to think.
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Just my 2 cents...
David Millstone