Luke,
A couple of concerns about your dance:
- Second version: Your dance appears to be reverse progression, if you begin the left hand stars with the neighbor you just swung. It's not entirely clear though (that neighbor isn't numbered).
- First version: If instead you force the progression to be in the normal direction in the first version, note that you're already progressed past neighbor #2 after the swing and chain, so it becomes a double progression.
Other than that, it looks like a fairly simple setting of star-halfway to star-halfway. I believe there will be end effects though, meaning sometimes you come in with the gent on the right and lady on the left. It looks like you have about 4 counts for each star, which looks right to me.
One well-known dance that makes use of a star-halfway to star-halfway figure is Dutch Crossing. However, its mechanics are slightly different from most contras (including mine below) since the stars meet at the corners instead of the sides.
You may be interested in my 4-facing-4 dance Constellation:
A1:
lines of 4 forward and back
(in groups of 4) ladies chain up/down
A2:
(in groups of 4) left hand star 1/2
(center 4) right hand star 1/2
(in groups of 4) left hand star 1/2
(center 4) right hand star 1/2
B1:
N balance, swing (the one you chained to)
B2:
(in groups of 4) circle left 3/4; P swing, face the next